13 LINES
I've seen people do this-and I thought I would give it a shot. Here are 13 lines from Lifting the Veil-which just released Wednesday.
1. Of all the things she’d ever imagined herself doing,
hawking an herbal remedy for erectile dysfunction that advertised itself as “the perfect way to RISE to the occasion” was definitely not among them.
2. “So, are they naked?”
3. “She is incredible, isn’t she?” Finn waggled his elegant brow. “Not only a voice that would tempt a saint, but that body! For such a tiny little thing, she has got one amazing
pair of—”
4. Bob was a Greek god.
5. As they stood in line in the ladies’ room, Meru listened to Sheridan’s relentless lecture on the evils of drinking and biting strange men.
So did the six other girls crammed into the smallish space with them.
From the looks on their faces, they thought her cousin was as crazy as she did. They must have seen the buff god she was dancing with.
6. “And why does your ex-boyfriend, who you never told me was such a prick by the way, suddenly look like a refugee from Snake town?"
7. “Are you sure somebody didn’t slip me a Mickey?” he asked hopefully. “Or maybe I have malaria. Are there spots on my tongue?” He stuck out his tongue.
8. “For heaven’s sake, look around you, Sher. We’re in a room full of Shifters and Faeries and Druids.”
“Oh my.”
9. The long mirror above the bathroom counter gave him an unhindered view of paradise, all the lush hills and valleys of his own personal Eden.
10. “Leabhar na cailleacha, tar ar ais chugam!”
11. In reality, his nearness was eroding her ability to think beyond the rather primitive, monosyllabic level of—You. Me. Floor. Now.
12. “All right,” she grumped. “But if you fall in love and get married, just know that Auntie Sheridan is not going to get stuck at home babysitting the puppies.”
13. “You’re playing a dangerous game, Meru.” His rasping voice slid down her spine in a rough caress and she shivered. “If you act like prey, the predator in me will want to run you down.”
1. Of all the things she’d ever imagined herself doing,
hawking an herbal remedy for erectile dysfunction that advertised itself as “the perfect way to RISE to the occasion” was definitely not among them.
2. “So, are they naked?”
3. “She is incredible, isn’t she?” Finn waggled his elegant brow. “Not only a voice that would tempt a saint, but that body! For such a tiny little thing, she has got one amazing
pair of—”
4. Bob was a Greek god.
5. As they stood in line in the ladies’ room, Meru listened to Sheridan’s relentless lecture on the evils of drinking and biting strange men.
So did the six other girls crammed into the smallish space with them.
From the looks on their faces, they thought her cousin was as crazy as she did. They must have seen the buff god she was dancing with.
6. “And why does your ex-boyfriend, who you never told me was such a prick by the way, suddenly look like a refugee from Snake town?"
7. “Are you sure somebody didn’t slip me a Mickey?” he asked hopefully. “Or maybe I have malaria. Are there spots on my tongue?” He stuck out his tongue.
8. “For heaven’s sake, look around you, Sher. We’re in a room full of Shifters and Faeries and Druids.”
“Oh my.”
9. The long mirror above the bathroom counter gave him an unhindered view of paradise, all the lush hills and valleys of his own personal Eden.
10. “Leabhar na cailleacha, tar ar ais chugam!”
11. In reality, his nearness was eroding her ability to think beyond the rather primitive, monosyllabic level of—You. Me. Floor. Now.
12. “All right,” she grumped. “But if you fall in love and get married, just know that Auntie Sheridan is not going to get stuck at home babysitting the puppies.”
13. “You’re playing a dangerous game, Meru.” His rasping voice slid down her spine in a rough caress and she shivered. “If you act like prey, the predator in me will want to run you down.”
16 Comments:
A collection of great lines, R.G.! I especially love 11 and 12.
Come again on 10...? :D
Hmm...Well, I'm partial to #2. Lots of promise in that question! LOL!
Very kewl. Some great lines there. I wish you a ton of sales.
Happy T13!
Okay... Numbers 7 and 11 made me laugh out loud. I like these - but should I be laughing this much?
Ciao!
Oooh--well, that experiment was certainly a success, if you're trying to be tempting, that is. :-) Ellora's Cave is beginning to love me as much as Barnes & Noble.
The line about the prick grabbed me! Fun TT13
So with #5, I take it she's talking to a vampire.
Great TT, RG. Such great lines. Grats again on the release.
Happy TT!
Love it! Sounds yummy!
*hugs*
Paige
My TT is at http://paigetylertheauthor.blogspot.com/
"Bob was a Greek god." Now that really grabbed me! Hehehe!
Awesome!!!!!! This book is going to sell a ton.
YAY! **jumping around like crazy fangirl**
Okay I have read this now.
Aaaaaaauuuuuugh I need more hours in the day!
Great lines. They really draw the reader in and make them want to buy the book.
Chloe
Congrats on your new release, RG. There are some great lines here.
So, about #2...are they naked?
Happy TT!!
Great lines! It sure grab my attention...good luck on your release book :)
Hey I like Dangerous Men, in books too! *grin* ...Thanks for visiting my blog and I hope you stop by again soon! Have a good day!
Julia-Yen
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