Monday, June 11, 2007

Poetry Monday

For my Cookie

"Write Good Sex Baby, I Love You"
reads the note stuck to my wall.
"There is coffee in the kitchen.
Drink some water, I will call."

How'd I ever live without him?
I inhale the coffee's steam.
He's my winning lotto ticket,
he's my living, breathing dream.

"How you feeling? How's the writing?
Work is fine the place is packed.
Tell me what you want for dinner,
I will make it when I'm back."

What did I do to deserve him?
I dont cook and I cant sew.
I am scatterbrained and flightly.
Yet he loves me, why? Who knows.

"Did you write good sex today hon?
Man, its good to see your face.
Will I read it? Sure, I'd love to.
Take a bite, how does this taste?"

He defends me from all comers
who would dare to doubt my goals.
He is brave and he is goofy
He's the balance in my soul.

So I hold him in the evening
and I tell him how I feel.
How I thank whoever sent him
How my love is true and real.

And he smiles as if I've given him
the world, the moon, the sky.
And I know that's all he wanted.
All he'll ask for till he dies.

After all the years of lonely isolation
pain and doubt
I hear "Write Good Sex, sweet baby."
And I know what love's about.


© R.G. Alexander

20 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I know she loves me. I can feel it in every touch, every look. I can hear how much she loves me when she says "good bye" in the mornings. But she hit home, hit my heart true with this poem. Made me tear up. Made me remember how much she means to me. Sometimes I get wrapped up in my own crap, and forget that she is my universe. Sometimes I forget to tell her why I breath in and out, why I wake up each day. It's for you My Love. Thank you.

Cookie

12:45 AM  
Blogger R.G. ALEXANDER said...

Awwww. Thank you baby.

12:48 AM  
Blogger Lillian Feisty said...

Crap you made me cry. Fuck. You really did.

12:51 AM  
Blogger MyUtopia said...

That's cool!

9:03 AM  
Blogger Heather Harper said...

Cookie is an awesome hero. Lucky you! :)

9:52 AM  
Blogger Jennifer McK said...

Oh, that's awesome. How totally wonderful.
And Cookie's response is just...amazing.
I was blog rolling and thought "RG will have a poem up! Cool".
I'm so glad I remembered.

10:19 AM  
Blogger Tempest Knight said...

Awww... that was a very beautiful poem, RG! :)

11:03 AM  
Blogger Crystal Jordan said...

Awwwwww. That's so freaking sweet, I'm gonna cry. And then I'd kill you both for making me cry in public. Just sayin'. Lucky you!

11:51 AM  
Blogger Carol said...

OK I'm jealous. What a lovely poem and wonderful response. The happy ending that all romances lead into. Carol

11:57 AM  
Blogger Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Well, seems to me that writing good sex means you're writing what you know... I'd keep you happy too! *grin*

Seriously. The Tour Manager does a lot of this. I say all the time that he makes my life possible. I hear ya.

12:02 PM  
Blogger Lisa Andel said...

I envy you. :)

(and I'm with Lillian. It brought tears to my eyes too.)

12:16 PM  
Blogger Anna J. Evans said...

sniff...with the crying people.

I am with you on this poem, SO deeply. I feel the same way about my sweet man, and wish I could write something as moving to let him know how much he is loved.

really great

anna j. evans

(whose honey tells her to write good sex too, lol.)

12:40 PM  
Blogger Karen Erickson said...

Aw you two make me cry! The two of you are the cutest, sweetest couple. Seriously. Without a doubt.

Though you will always and forever be MY breadroll. ;)

1:29 PM  
Blogger Antonia Pearce said...

I'm so glad I stopped by, Dearest Doppleganger, even though I am crying my eyes out.

What a lovely poem and what an amazing response from your Cookie. You are both so fortunate to have found each other.

1:52 PM  
Blogger Robin L. Rotham said...

Oh my. I'm feeling teary myself -- what a guy! What a poem! What a love! :D

2:29 PM  
Blogger Grace Tyler said...

R.G. Thanks for stopping by my blog today and keeping me company. I loved your poem. That's a sweet companion you've got there!

2:54 PM  
Blogger Rhian / Crowwoman said...

yup - you and Cookie made me tear up too - dang it. i know i TOLD you i hate crying.
running off to tell hubby all about this post....

4:36 PM  
Blogger Ann said...

Lovely poem.

6:03 PM  
Blogger Rebecca said...

Cookie sounds like a total legend of a man!

6:10 PM  
Blogger Eden Bradley said...

Well that's it-you made me cry. Just a little welling of the eyes from the poem, then The Cookie had to come on and really start the water works. But unlike Crystal and Rhian, I love a good cry, so thanks.
I love you guys!*sniff*

12:19 AM  

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